OMG No Way Its the return of eagle den!!!111!!!1!~111!

So I finaly started writeing the Fall Of Eagle Den today....... Yeah I'm bloody lazy as fuck... But any ways.... I have a spare right now and I'm at the library on my lappy. Oh and heres the first paragraph of the story... Remember this is only the first paragraph and other charecters will have background build up just as strong. And without any further ado..





The
Fall Of Eagle Den








It was mid spring in a small town some where in the
northern United States, the day was warm and beutiful as usaul and
the flowers were just comeing into bloom, and a young arctic fox by
the name Shimo was to be meeting his two best friend's in their
favorite field just outside the town. The town was a small quaint
place, the edge of the mountains were just to the north west and the
plains and deserts to the south. Shimo had moved to the small town of
Point Pine Claw at the age of seventeen, he lived alone and picked up
a full time job at the local inn. Though reluctent to hire a
seventeen John, the owner of the inn needed the extra help, and ever
since the United States fell under miltia control workers rights had
gone down the drain, John even ofered the boy a place to stay at the
inn, at least until he could aford a place. Despite all the bad luck
Shimo finaly ran into a bit of luck, one of the regulars the
frequented the inn for his meals grew found of the young bus boy, and
when he passed on from old age his last will was read, every thing
the old man owned was to be left to Shimo with an alowance of six
hundred a month until his twenty first birthday.


Edit: The forum kind of made a mess of my centered text for the tittle and the space in between...... I'm to bloody lazy to fix it so what ever.

Hurray! Is teh thing that started all! *dances*
I like the direction you are going with this. It's too early to tell where it's going, so no critique from me.
(I just told you this, but imma postin so everyone else will notice it X3)

*hits Volk with a rolled up newspaper*

"no bad Volk! No random moments in this role play!" Pixel says, "its too much random that ruin the other two role plays."

lol

happy bday volk

(I guess Ill start things up but if this post is a bit early or is going against your past plans I guess it can be deleted if thats nessasary.)

Pixel walked through the inn's front doors, the same thing he normally did on the weekends of spring and summer.
Pixel lived in Point Pine Claw for almost his entire life. He was know around town as a sort of comical person. Lightening up the mood was practally his hobby.
Pixel walked into the quiet inn and sat at his useal seat, next to a table near one of the windows over looking the town outside. He took off his hat and placed it next to him on the table.

Ummm Pixel...... The role play is under Thats what Friends are for...... This was the novel I'm writing about eagle den.... Please try to stay on topic... I can understand how you got confused though.

Oops sorry about that....This five weeks with my internet down really threw me off...

lol my internet went down for 2 days once and I was screaming at my provider XD

I gladly am the first on my areas fix list cause we are closest where the trucks come, so ours is usually up rather quickly.

LOL Mine went down for two day becouse the box outrside done gone and blowed up.